Colin, the best part to me
Not by any road
Can body leave this isolated place,
And yet your lucid gaze
Reflects no prison cell.
No seasons here;
All come together
In one unending
Some time tomorrow.
I wonder how this would be written to be more haiku-like.
Gary
Feb CE Chaffin, Celebrations and Blessings at:
http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html --- Writer's Hood at
http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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