Gary,
I like the duality of wall, as memorial and barrier.
Re suggestions I would use "for" instead of "unto" in the last line. Might
be smoother?
Colin
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From: "Gary Blankenship" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Sunday, February 23, 2003 10:43 PM
Subject: Build a Wall to War
Build a Wall to War
a wall for the holocausts
killing fields
gulags
a wall for the lynching
ethnic cleansing
destroy in order to save campaigns
a wall for our children
and theirs
unto all eternity
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