I like this seeing the moon's refection in a pool or puddle. A spiritual
poem which I like. SallyJ
>From: "D.C Bursey" <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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>Subject: Well of souls is full(rewrite)
>Date: Wed, 19 Feb 2003 17:46:04 -0330
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>Fall's moon, wears a foreboding ring,
>casts silver light upon the rim,
>of a dark pool so perfectly round
>reflections are lost within.
>
>A pool with liquid layers of man
>filled to the brim with war and hate,
>blackness seeps down to rust hell's gate.
>
>One lone juniper stands ready,
>under a mountain's watchful face,
>to catch the lost innocents
>before they sink and fade.
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