from the pouring out of its constancy.
You need the easy sense of insanity.
No bright tern or soaring kittiwake comes near -
intuitively aware of your metaphor.
James, every time I try these kind of rhymes I get chipping, but make them
work. I do wonder at the last four lines ending in the same rhyme:
appear
only another heavy wave will take it further.
No bright tern or soaring kittiwake comes near -
intuitively aware of your metaphor.
Seems the last two should be other rhymes.
And what word Christina would object to. Kittiwake?
Thanks.
Gary
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