On Fri, 9 May 2003, Norman Gray wrote:
> All,
>
> I've adjusted the HDX overview
> <http://www.astro.gla.ac.uk/users/norman/star/java/hdx/> in the light
> of folk's comments. Thanks for those.
>
> > If you were to extend it for the less-technical I'd say it's missing an
> > up-front statement about what problems HDX is solving and why it's
> > implementation is more elegant and suitable for the web than traditional
> > data forms.
>
> Done, I think, with the addition of an `abstract', which also now mentions
> FITS in the second sentence (thanks, Pat).
>
In your talk you might want to point out how this approach is better than
the currently accepted approach (which seems to be a straight URL pointing
to a FITS file and there was also that other approach that was mentioned
at the meeting a couple of weeks ago). Providing concrete gains over
current approaches would be useful.
--
Tim Jenness
JAC software
http://www.jach.hawaii.edu/~timj
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