Hi Mark
Excellent to see your work on the Wild Honey site -and hail to the mighty
Randolph for doing another great service to the list!
there is lots of work here and I havent had time to read it all, so I
started with the most recent - the 'Riffs'. They are interesting and
playful. I caught quite a few references to the names of people and
wondered if each one started from a name, and I just hadnt caught them
all.... I enjoyed the puns and sound shifts in them, and the slide into
Spanish that you work in. Could you give a little gloss on that - it would
help my reading? Lots of sound energy that is very satisfying. I enjoyed
them.
And some nice twists of humour in 'Notebook Entries' that made me chuckle.
I shall definitely come back to this and read more
Thanks Mark
Liz
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