Jennifer,
Right from its title your post struck a chord with me, not only in the context
of the list, but also I find myself uttering that phrase in many situations.
Have you seen Rebecca's post about problems with hotmail addresses?
Could this apply to you?
I enjoyed reading your poem. I see what Rebecca means about couplets
as opposed to triplets, but personally I find that your use of triplets with
quite
a few enjambments keeps the reader slightly off balance and therefore keeps
some movement going in the poem. Which is appropriate.
Now I'll snap my fingers and disappear again...
Kari
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