Dominic,
I like this poem very much, the enforced yet unforced compression,
surprising images bumping up against one another. Nice.
Chris Murray
http://texfiles.blogspot.com
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Sent: 12/6/2003 4:20 PM
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COMPACTED, BUT STILL POROUS. Hard
loaves and fishes, an unrealised
polity milling about on the shore.
Your choice of two horizons, one
of painful and inflicted death.
Place-holders aloft: cruciform take-off
casts Central Office in shadow. Banner
of many coloured stripes to perform
multiple declensions in midday sun.
Dominic
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