"My today, your yesterday and
the world keeps turning into tomorrow."
Pretty interestings lines, Jill.
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Frank Parker
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-----Original Message-----
From: Poetryetc provides a venue for a dialogue relating to poetry and
poetics [mailto:[log in to unmask]]On Behalf Of Jill Jones
Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2003 12:35 AM
To: [log in to unmask]
Subject: Re: snapshot 25 jill jones
Hi Patrick,
Rime is a good word - and I see what you mean - but 'rim' was doing its bit
between 'green' and 'spring'.
It *was* spare, me doing a two-step for a change.
Funny, Max's snaps always come on the day for me. My today, your yesterday
and
the world keeps turning into tomorrow.
Cheers,
Jill
> Jill I liked this but did read it as green rime-nice and spare (for me)
> 44 in emails only one snapshot max's always come yesterday!
> gird your loins and whatever poetryetcetters
> cheer patrick off to vol work -mental health day centre
>
> quoto jobo
>
> ouyn,dow,tray,peswar ,pimp
>
> and for some--------
>
> Windle,wandle,
> in welchen Handle,
> oben oder unt.
>
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: Jill Jones <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Wednesday, October 15, 2003 5:45 AM
> Subject: snapshot 25
>
>
> > green rim
> > plate spring
> > onion
> > chili
> > cast here
> > binding
> > tongue burn
> > that I
> > miss in
> > the line
> > burden
> > risk frag-
> > ment track
> > over
> > road air
> > sweetness
> > and smoke
> > glass of
> > tea slight
> > lemon
> > taste on
> > tongue hold-
> > ing up
> > the day
> >
> > Jill Jones, 2.15pm, 15 October 2003
>
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