Agree with Doug - also like the rhythm being just right for the subject.
Steve KK
On 16/11/03 2:59 AM, "Douglas Barbour" <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
> Oh wow, Hal, that's like a subtle blow to the head. I've seen some of the
> TV coverage & what with the other counter-insurgency in California, well,
> it's hard times indeed.
>
> I also like the form so stretched...
>
> Doug
>
> Douglas Barbour
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>
> I have been thinking a great deal
> about my bike that will be stolen.
>
> I don't like things whose inevitability
> works against me.
>
> Why have you driven through my heart?
> Make that what.
>
> Artie Gold
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