At 8:08 AM -0800 4/5/03, Jon Corelis wrote:
>I think though that the lines
>
> but your voice
> speaks
> and moves
>
>are putty; it would be stronger to go right into "you are right."
Great note, Jon: will do. It works much better. Thanks.
Cheers
A
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