Hi Steve,
some comments on SUN/251.
- SPLAT
The introduction section about SPLAT is now out of date. Lift this from
the new version of SUN/243.
In this part should
Documentation
be a subsubsection? As Mark say's don't use quotations like "Help" use
`Help', or ``Help'' in LaTeX.
- SoG
In the second paragraph I'd mention JSkycat as well for appropriate
attribution:
SoG and JSkycat implement a number of features which include:
(all of the things you mention in the list are from JSkycat after all).
- General Class in STARJAVA
You don't mention JSky in the third party section.
Similar comments about the consistent use of a typographical style to
SUN/212 also apply (filenames, commands, etc.) throughout.
Cheers,
Peter.
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