She found
that she gave up vindaloo
and turned to the sweet
and aromatic dishes, with lots
of plain boiled rice, pure white.
Grassy, like many others I am puzzled by the story, but I also wonder how
this would work if laid out in she/he stanzas, maybe couplets:
She found that she gave up vindaloo and turned to the sweet
and aromatic dishes, with lots of plain boiled rice, pure white.
Might take a bit of tightening, but the above 14 count per.
Thanks.
Gary
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