Indeed I would liketo see the shaping
sutained into the latter half of the poem which
pursues a different form.
Cara, I see her point too but stubborn up in this case. I like mixed form,
a bit of the Dawg's conceit as he explores this thing we do.
Thanks.
Gary
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