Hi Sally,
For some reason, this poem is extremely visual to me. I think it must be
the way you've used the slippery jelly and the broken heart; Geez, what a
combo! Super well done on this one Sally.
CW, Mary :O)
--- Sally James <[log in to unmask]> wrote:
>
>
> I wanted to tell him
> I loved him
> but the words
> slipped off my tongue
> like jelly
> slid to the ground
> like a heart
> not beating
> just broken.
>
> Sally James
>
>
> Valentine's day is
> washing underpants and socks
> and no chocolates
>
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Good Cheer & Be Well,
Maryann Hazen-Stearns
"Under The Limbo Stick"
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