Server is Outlook
is there a problem with my messages. I type them out on WORD then copy and
paste. does this cause problems at your end. Bob Cooper complains . I seem
to receive everything OK.
By the way your crit is a bit confusing. Could you be more specific, Gary.
What's "a lot of picky"??
Sorry
----- Original Message -----
From: "garydawg" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Tuesday, February 12, 2002 4:29 PM
Subject: Re: Eye of the Beholder: Rewrite.
> The last time I had seen a face like that
> was in a B movie when I was 8,
> coming over the side of a schooner
> from a Malayan pirate junk.
>
> Now that face sipped Solbrew
> while I looked away
> and back. He watched me,
> his grin a feral snarl.
>
> Arthur, kind of a lot of picky, but some S as the second above seem week
to
> me compared to others, the first above. They may be necessary for the
story
> to move along, but seem to need a bit of punching up.
>
> BTW, what is your mail provider? Outlook or ?
>
> Thanks.
>
> Gary
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> Feb guest is TE Ballard and Gar does garbage at:
> http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html,
>
> Poets for Peace. ˇPoemas sí, balas no!
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