I want him to read the words
and he will
at a price
he is a hard man
a pedant
one who knows what he likes and will say so
then in a follow-up note
advise me of my errors
punctuation
grammar
misinterpretation of natural phenomena
he wants to be unstinting
in his support
to be a help
to make each expression correct
but seems always unsatisfied
if the words
were his own
it would be different
~
Frank
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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