Dear Gary
Many apologies. My fear when given a line for a Hyperpoem is that I'm going
to waste it. I thought we were limited to one line and I tried to be
economical by using the line for a sonnet and then for a free form, not
realising it could cause you problems. Trouble is I write too much, I think.
Kind regards
 grasshopper

----- Original Message -----
From: "garydawg" <[log in to unmask]>
Subject: Re: New Sub:Hyperpoem: Atlantis


sound us with your subtle sensors,
we will keep our secrets still.
Here in the liquid caverns
where life first burst-bubbled,
slowly, deeply, we are transforming time.
While you hasten to conclusion,
we are moving to beginning;
while you scramble to your finish,
we are building into birth.

Grassy, a message poem well done.  But I have to figure out how to link two
poems from the same poet?

Hmmmmm.

Thanks much, the end of the finest kind.

Gary

and a bit pleasant to dream our technology not sharp enough to find them


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