Lynn,
A succulent poem. I think technically it was fish and
chips that pulled 'the people' through.Butter was a
bit special.
Where is the nutmeg or allspice?
Personally I should prefer to see the ingredients
grouped into lines rather than each occupying one for
itself in stanza 2.
I think the final couplet says exactly what you want
it to say but imho it could be more adroit. cheers,
cara
--- Lynn Owen <[log in to unmask]> wrote: >
Bread and butter pudding
> one I'm working hard on, thoughts and reactions
> welcome.
> Thanks for the workshop.
> Lynn
> Making Do
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> In my day "We made do"
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> stale became fresh
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> bread and butter pudding
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> pulled us through
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> All you need is:
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> Bread
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> Butter
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> Raisins
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> Eggs
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> Sugar
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> Milk
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> When you say bread
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> do you mean any bread?
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> or do you mean
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> brown, white, naan
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> pitta, soda or
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> baguette
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> Butter?
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> salted, un-salted
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> is there such a thing as an organic cow?
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> I once saw a four leaf clover
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> Raisins?
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> That should be easy
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> a partially dried grape
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> not too wet
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> not too dry
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> gold or black
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> never silver
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> Eggs?
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> free range
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> brown, white
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> small, medium
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> or large
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> Sugar?
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> White, brown
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> Cubed or granuled
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> Milk?
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> cow, goat, sheep
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> dried, semi, whole
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> soya
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> I told you to "make do"
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> Mother I can't "make do"
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> choice doesn't allow me to
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