After reading a few prior posts (esp. Gar Dawgs ref to ponds), I've got
alliteration and rhyme on the brain...<G>
How's this: puddle jumping for poetry. I, too, wish I could hear Sally
read--et al! One of these days I'll splash on over...
Ok, here's a zip with revision. Which works better?
hidden beneath dried leaves and twigs
a bird's nest its family gone
[I thought about using "fledglings" instead of "family". What do you all
think?]
in the crook of a barren tree
a wren's nest survived first storm
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