Vix the victim
Vix the persecuted
Vix the ancient presence
torn, tormented, taunted
labelled vile and verminous
by a destroying race
hunted, disinterred,
killed by close kin, cubs
clubbed for sport
I hail
Grassy, I like your tribute to fox. I just finished one to our equiv -
Coyote.
A few suggestions. I would drop the I hail. I wonder if it is a bit long,
esp the Vix lines or if it would read well if the 2nd and 3rd Vix in each S
were dropped. Consider a switch for S1 and 2, the heavier bit later.
Thanks.
Gary
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