Sue, David, Bob, Roger, many thanks for your comments.
It should certainly be the Pen, (or the Penn) shouldn't it? In fact that
whole 4th stanza was written by my evil and cloth-eared twin, who often
inserts rubbish like this just to show me up.
It will be dealt with....
Kind regards,
grasshopper
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From: "Brigid Anthony" <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Monday, December 30, 2002 4:35 PM
Subject: New sub:Tried and true
Sharp, ironical with a serious message; I enjoyed this.
In S4, L2 I think you need to say "the pen" ("and then if I'm sent to the
pen" would possibly fix it).
Best regards,
David
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