James, let me play with this a bit. I like the theme but see several things
you might consider.
Thanks.
Gary
but (cut)
here between the traffic (cut here)
on goodge street
there is space for me
between the square white obilisks (cut the)
displaying shamanistic arrow signs
no bible or shakespeare
but (horrid line break, but I would cut and go with another transition
between the books and beer: no bible or shakespeare resides here/only two
cans... though I'm not sure that works with in a place etc)
two cans of special brew
in a place of my own
where everything else
except me (no break, moves on)
is moving on
today i noticed a foot print (I would cap the I unless you want your id to
be subordianted)
preserved in the concrete
that tells me there was (consider: another of my kind/was here long ago
for your last 3 lines)
another of my kind here
a long time ago
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