Hello again Ann,
I think `awaits´ without `patiently´ would work perfectly. A comma before `sets hard´ instead of a fullstop reads better to me.
Best wishes, Mike
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Dear Mike
Thanks for the comments. I could just use 'awaits' and omit
patiently. I rather like that, as for 'Sets hard' perhaps I could just use a
comma instead of a stop? The intent was to convey how our lifestyles and
temperaments are changed by our environment, but not obliterated, in the end
the same feelings are there in essence, how we arrive there is just
different,
thanks again regards Ann
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