I think 'Doc. Marten's' would be more in character
and perhaps 'probably my size' as one line. cheers,
cara

--- alderoak <[log in to unmask]> wrote: > how
deliciously unexpected
>
> I love the obelisks (I think that's the spelling)
> and the shamanistic arrow
> signs
> and the reference to Desert Island Discs in stanza 2
> (which may be lost on
> non- Radio 4 listeners) contrasts well with the
> iconic special brew
>
> I found S3  a bit less interesting. I like the idea
> of the footprint - very
> Robinson Crusoe - but I wanted something fresher -
> and I've had the cheek to
> add some initial thoughts which i hope you will have
> the sense to
> discard....
>
> Terri )O(
>
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "James Bell" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Wednesday, January 23, 2002 2:41 PM
> Subject: New sub: No Man Is An Island
>
>
> > This is very much a rough cut so comments very
> welcome
> >
> > NO MAN IS AN ISLAND
> >
> > but
> > here between the traffic
> > on goodge street
> > there is space for me
> > between the square white obilisks
> > displaying shamanistic arrow signs
> >
> > no bible or shakespeare
> > but
> > two cans of special brew
> > in a place of my own
> > where everything else
> > except me
> > is moving on
> >
> > today
> > i noticed a foot print
> > preserved in concrete
> Dr. Marten's probably
> my size
> brimfull of dog's wee
>
> > there was another
> >like me
> > long ago
> >
> > James Bell
> >
> >
> >
>
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