Gary, thanks for the assessment of this poem. Welcome as always. I was cut
off in my primr by the computer I was using so its actually incomplete,
though I think sufficient comment has been made by others to give me sound
thought on how to continue.
bw
James
>From: Gary Blankenship <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: New sub: Reading Poetry
>Date: Tue, 10 Dec 2002 09:48:00 -0800
>
>James, a good read, but a bit long. You start with std punc but go to
>stream of consciousness. I would do it all in the latter.
>
>After listening to you read
>the reonance still comes (reonance?)
>from the text set in
>Goudy Old Style and makes
>new poems possibilities
>each time each poem here
>is read, though it is said
>you need to be young to hold
>such feeling in the breast
>and just goes to show (an ugly line, please cut)
>the state of perishable flesh
>
>have found a new format
>beyon (something was cut off)
>
>Thanks.
>
>Gary
>
>
>
>Dec Byron Sacre at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html... Writer's
>Hood at http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas sí,
>balas
>no!
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