James, a good read, but a bit long. You start with std punc but go to
stream of consciousness. I would do it all in the latter.
After listening to you read
the reonance still comes (reonance?)
from the text set in
Goudy Old Style and makes
new poems possibilities
each time each poem here
is read, though it is said
you need to be young to hold
such feeling in the breast
and just goes to show (an ugly line, please cut)
the state of perishable flesh
have found a new format
beyon (something was cut off)
Thanks.
Gary
Dec Byron Sacre at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html... Writer's
Hood at http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas sí, balas
no!
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