Frank, thanks for the well done.
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also felt, however, it seemed to run out of steam in the last five lines!
I felt I wanted more details (things that showed me the how/when/where/ of
"whenever she
>could save a few coins from egg sales,
>laundry, and bottle returns."
Bob, thanks. There will be a rewrite, but probably not any more details.
Husbandless, she survives as best she can.
Gary
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Hood at http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas sí, balas
no!
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