Ann, lovely, this my fav:
A broken bamboo
Above the sound of birdsong
How happiness lies.
If you want to learn more go to http://www.ahapoetry.com/homepage.htm, the
best place to start learning about haiku and full of links to learn more.
If you want to get into the debates about 5 7 5, modern free verse, seasonal
references, emotion, metaphor, et al, let me know and I will point you to a
couple of forums, but if I were you, I would keep on the course you have set
until you are comfortable.
Thanks.
Gary
Dec Byron Sacre at: http://gardawg.homestead.com/gardawg.html... Writer's
Hood at http://www.writershood.com/... Poets for Peace.... ˇPoemas sí, balas
no!
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