Thanks for reading and commenting. Mike. Not one of my best I'm afraid.
Regards Arthur.
----- Original Message -----
From: "Mike Horwood" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Monday, November 25, 2002 10:08 AM
Subject: Re Succubus
Hello Arthur,
This is quite a piece, fascinating. I enjoyed it. There´s
only one suggestion that I´d like to make. If it was mine I think I´d be
looking for a word to replace `maw´.
Best wishes, Mike
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