Yes , of course, you are quite right. terribly overwritten. We all make
mistakes, *grin*. This is one of mine. Regards Arthur
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From: "Gary Blankenship" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Monday, November 25, 2002 4:18 PM
Subject: Re: New Sub: Succubus
> brought to those moist and musky zones
> to cunningly linger
> between the dizzying white cliffs
> of her thighs.
>
> Arthur, poetic enough, but I wonder if not too much. Sorry, but not my
cup
> of tea. Seems overwritten to me.
>
> Good luck.
>
> Thanks.
>
> Gary
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