Thanks Ryfka, I am so glad that you found this poem powerful. It may be
thought to be Freudian, but, in writing it I was diplaying feelings about
the death of Princess Diana, thus the title. Lila tov, Philip.
>From: Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub: Candle in the Wind (second draft)
>Date: Sun, 24 Nov 2002 16:22:31 EST
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>In a message dated 11.24.02 7:10:04 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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>You cuddle in your city sprawl but I get no sex at all
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>Alone, I glow, outshone by avenues of sodium
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>I wag my luminary tail, supposed to interest the male
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>Blighter couldn’t see me now if I were neon-powered >>
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>I like your word choices and placement in this poem a lot...has power.
>
>kol tuv, Ryfkah
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