In a message dated 11.24.02 7:10:04 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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You cuddle in your city sprawl but I get no sex at all
Alone, I glow, outshone by avenues of sodium
I wag my luminary tail, supposed to interest the male
Blighter couldn’t see me now if I were neon-powered >>
I like your word choices and placement in this poem a lot...has power.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
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