Thanks for reading James. Sorry you found it confusing. Regards Arthur
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From: "James Bell" <[log in to unmask]>
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Sent: Saturday, November 23, 2002 3:17 PM
Subject: Re: New Sub: Succubus
> Confusing this Arthur. Bobby sox is very fifties. Is this a Lolita figure?
> The city sacked is mixing metaphor and the whole effect leaves me as
reader
> wondering what I am actually reading. Hope this is helpful.
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> bw
> James
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> >From: arthur seeley <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: New Sub: Succubus
> >Date: Sat, 23 Nov 2002 07:41:33 -0000
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> > Succubus
> >
> >Sometimes she comes to me
> >slender and pale as a peeled stick,
> >pony-tailed, bobbie-socked
> >and bubble-gum-breathed
> >
> >or sometimes she comes for me
> >with tits like turrets,
> >buttocks a-quiver
> >riding stock slapping a bright boot,
> >
> >more often I am aware
> >of a growing heat behind me,
> >perfumed and sensuous.
> >I am held in her lithe coils
> >
> >brought to those moist and musky zones
> >to cunningly linger
> >between the dizzying white cliffs
> >of her thighs.
> >
> >Dismayed by soft hisses of pleasure.
> >I feel her dark wings
> >over me; held in crooked grasp;
> >dredged by that maw.
> >
> >She drops me,
> >a city sacked
> >by an army in triumph,
> >pillaged, in ashes.
> >
> >I watch her leave,
> >trailing her pearly spoor behind,
> >sliming the moonlit slates
> >of neighbouring roofs.
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