Confusing this Arthur. Bobby sox is very fifties. Is this a Lolita figure?
The city sacked is mixing metaphor and the whole effect leaves me as reader
wondering what I am actually reading. Hope this is helpful.
bw
James
>From: arthur seeley <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New Sub: Succubus
>Date: Sat, 23 Nov 2002 07:41:33 -0000
>
> Succubus
>
>Sometimes she comes to me
>slender and pale as a peeled stick,
>pony-tailed, bobbie-socked
>and bubble-gum-breathed
>
>or sometimes she comes for me
>with tits like turrets,
>buttocks a-quiver
>riding stock slapping a bright boot,
>
>more often I am aware
>of a growing heat behind me,
>perfumed and sensuous.
>I am held in her lithe coils
>
>brought to those moist and musky zones
>to cunningly linger
>between the dizzying white cliffs
>of her thighs.
>
>Dismayed by soft hisses of pleasure.
>I feel her dark wings
>over me; held in crooked grasp;
>dredged by that maw.
>
>She drops me,
>a city sacked
>by an army in triumph,
>pillaged, in ashes.
>
>I watch her leave,
>trailing her pearly spoor behind,
>sliming the moonlit slates
>of neighbouring roofs.
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