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Re: New sub: Sound Bite
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Ryfkah * <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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Thu, 21 Nov 2002 20:08:08 EST
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I like the gist of the poem and the image of cooking the lover. I would like to see more continuity; the Freud part after the blowtorch burning ot hair seems tacked on though I do think it is a clever ending. kol tuv, Ryfkah
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