Gary,
Many thanks for your comments,
Freda
----- Original Message -----
From: "Gary Blankenship" <[log in to unmask]>
To: <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Tuesday, November 19, 2002 5:09 PM
Subject: Re: New Subs: First Wish
> Freda, here
>
> Scatter me broadcast
> on the fields by Ely,
> under the skies
> which levelled my growing.
>
> why me in the first line?
>
> It seems a bit too long, but that may be form. If four line S would it?
>
> Country tempers sent me off to London
> at school's end. It was soon to be service
> for me, your girl, to knock in some sense.
> She said what she meant, Ma, and packed me,
>
> This is and the bullocks good stuff
>
> embroidered by aunts
> who worked out their eyes
> when lamps were dull.
>
>
> Thanks.
>
> Gary
>
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