Thank you Mike. It's pretty marvellous when a piece comes together well. I
wasn't sure this would work when I wrote it, but feedback suggests it's ok,
and I seem to be able to read it all right, so I can't ask for much more
from it.
I think you're right, however, regarding the line you highlighted and I'm
reworking it, even as we speak.
Thanks again, glad you enjoyed.
Cheers,
Frank
The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
>Hello Frank,
> This piece worked for me and it grew on me more one
>second and third readings. You´ve got a nice tone and rhythm to it. I
>wasn´t so keen on the line `look a long way down´ in stanza2 which seemed a
>bit pedestrian in comparison with the more imaginative diction of the rest
>of the poem. The final stanza is great. Reading it aloud it has a
>wonderful, almost hypnotic or incantatory rhythm.
>
>Best wishes, Mike
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