Sorry, Lynn, I think faulty grammar is faulty grammar, not a matter of a
poetic voice. If writers don't care about the English language, who will?
That's my last comment about it.
Kind regards,
grasshopper
----- Original Message -----
From: "Lynn Owen" <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Wednesday, November 20, 2002 9:16 PM
Subject: Re: A short for thought - Poems...don't stop now!!
> on this occasion it's "I'm sat in the shade" If I wrote as I you suggest
> then I'd be using your voice.
> My voice says "I'm sat in the shade" if that's a problem for you then I
> suggest you delete.
> Either or niether?
> Lynn
> ----- Original Message -----
> From: "grasshopper" <[log in to unmask]>
> To: <[log in to unmask]>
> Sent: Wednesday, November 20, 2002 8:52 PM
> Subject: Re: A short for thought - Poems...don't stop now!!
>
>
> > I think it's either I sat in the shade or I'm sitting in the shade....
> > Kind regards,
> > grasshopper
>
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