Gosh, Frank, most of my crows are gay.  I wonder why you don't encounter
them?
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Thank you for suggestions nad comment Barbara.

I don't think I dare to change the piece, though. I read it to a fairly
mixed audience last night - the feature was doing readings about gay sex and
had attracted a crows that I don't encounter often. When I read the piece
there was an audible sigh at the end, suggesting the poem struck a chord
with at least a few listeners, so I think that's good enough for me LOL. I
can't really ask for more from a piece.

Cheers,

Frank

PS of course when I read the piece about dressing up in tight leathers there
was quite a different reaction, but we don't need to go there. F~