This is so good. Maybe we all ought to do one on Pennine. I'm guessing but
this is zip haiku?
bw
James
>From: Karina Klesko <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: An Invitation from Creative Minds
>Date: Tue, 19 Nov 2002 18:36:21 EST
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> " Le Prima Facie"!
> (curtains please)
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> Blues for Pink Shoes
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>yellow police tape twists slowly
> in the wind her body bag suhni
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>trampled orange pop flowers by the drainage ditch karina
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>the broken guard rail points towards
> a shattered fifth and pink shoe gary
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>a row of brownstones frayed pages
> in her journal one dog-eared karina
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>a crow lines its nest with green rag and buttons gary
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> blues echo down the alley
>a blind singer peers over his shades suhni
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> faux pearls caught in the flash
>behind gray curtains fingers melt into dark gary
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>red stained gloves in the sink the pot boils over suhni
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> in rain or shine snow or sleet
>an old smokescreen the small plane takes off karina
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>Suhni Bell, Karina Klesko, Gary Blankenship
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>Hi ! An invitation to all Super Sleuths to solve the first "Who in the
>World?" Renine (Rengay)
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>It can be solved in three ways. All in six verse rengay
>1. Form a team of three players, and each write a verse corresponding to a
>clue
>When it is complete see if you have solved the mystery person.
>2. Form a team, brainstorm the clues and then write the answer to the
>Renine.
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>3. For those who like to work solo or have odd hours, solve it in a solo
>rengay.
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>For other Workshops and Poetry Forums
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>Post the answers within your own group or forum in your preferred style of
>prose or poetry.
>Or you may join the Renkujin Palace by writing John Villarana, Oxford,
>England
><A
>HREF="mailto:[log in to unmask]">[log in to unmask]</A>
> The guest giving the workshop is the author
>of the Rengay , Garry Gay.
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>The Rengay - Garry Gay :six verse linked verse for two or more people L15/
>S11
>The placement of the long and the short are determined by the amount of
>poets
>taking part in each one.
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>The Renine -Gary Blankeship: nine verses pattern as follows
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>1 2 3
>2 3 1
>3 1 2
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>I hope it's as fun to solve as it was to write!
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>Warm Regards, Blues for Pink Shoes
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