Dear Ryfkah,
The Englyn is a traditional Welsh form,so conforms to a particular scheme.-
if you'll notice the first line has an internal rhyme.
(I'll see if I can find a link that gives full information)
Kind regards,
grasshopper
----- Original Message -----
From: "Ryfkah *" <[log in to unmask]>
Sent: Sunday, November 17, 2002 4:34 PM
Subject: Re: New: Englyn
> In a message dated 11.14.02 1:55:17 PM, [log in to unmask] writes:
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> << The walls still breathe her scent, leaning as if
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> a mirror might be bent
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> to capture the way she lent
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> checked her lipsticked smile, then went. >>
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> I like the poem; how about making the first line rhyme too.
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> kol tuv, Ryfkah
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