Hi Lynn,
I'm caught by the clarity and the cleverness of your poem!
The first two lines establish a traditional rhythm... then (delight of
delights!) everything - including the rhythm - changes! (Subtle & Brill!).
And the allusion to fashion in the last three lines is subtle as well.
I wish I could write such shorts!
Bob
>From: Lynn Owen <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: A short for thought - Poems
>Date: Fri, 15 Nov 2002 18:12:37 -0000
>
>Poems
>
>poems are not just black and white
>neither are they grey
>they are colours
>sometimes they co-ordinate
>other times they clash
>
>Lynn
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