Hi Terri,
A fine, neat, well-worked piece. Memorable. That such a small tightly
complex form can open up so much feeling is one of the powers of poetry.
Hope you keep clocking on and reading, commenting, writing.
Bob
>From: alderoak <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: New: Englyn
>Date: Thu, 14 Nov 2002 21:40:20 -0000
>
>sorry to be sending and not critting. The desertification of my life is
>near
>total and these lines the only living thing I have managed to salvage...
>
>
>Englyn; Her Room
>
>The walls still breathe her scent, leaning as if
>a mirror might be bent
>to capture the way she lent
>checked her lipsticked smile, then went.
>
>Terri )O(
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