Hi Paul,
A surreal series of images here! I feel compelled by it, I want to read the
next part as I'm going through it.
The only part where I sort of feel I'm not going with the flow is:
"I re-hook. Back and forth went the engine in the no nonsense night. Back
and forth, into the womb, tomb and charnel house. I unhitched the lever,
pulled, and spewed forth the perfect story machine."
And that might be because I don't get what "I re-hook" means! But that might
just be me... the phrase might give me a meaning in the coming days. And the
phrase "the perfect story-machine" seems a puzzling thing as well. (If I
felt easier with accepting re-hook I may feel easier about the
story-machine...).
The rest, however, feels strange yet it works!
Bob
>From: paul murphy <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: poem
>Date: Mon, 11 Nov 2002 22:38:29 +0000
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