I like this-its resonance and economy
BW
Christine
> -----Original Message-----
> From: Sally James [SMTP:[log in to unmask]]
> Sent: 12 November 2002 17:54
> To: [log in to unmask]
> Subject: Re: Autumn Traveller
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> David I want to say how much I enjoyed your poem, Sometimes a short poem
> can
> say a lot and this one does. It works on two levels both in an inner and
> an
> outer landscape and for me this is what makes a poem special. Bw Sally J
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> >From: David Anthony <[log in to unmask]>
> >Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
> >To: [log in to unmask]
> >Subject: Autumn Traveller
> >Date: Tue, 12 Nov 2002 08:41:06 +0000
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> >Autumn Traveller
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> >It's hard to see my way because
> >the leaves have fallen. Now
> >they drift where once the clear path was-
> >it's hard to see my way. Because
> >the light is brief, I dare not pause;
> >I'll find the track somehow.
> >It's hard to see my way because
> >the leaves have fallen now.
> >
> >David Anthony
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