Sorry about the last two lines Frank I will fiddle at bit with it and try
and improve. Bw Sally J






>From: Frank Faust <[log in to unmask]>
>Reply-To: The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
>To: [log in to unmask]
>Subject: Re: new sub Big bang theory
>Date: Thu, 14 Nov 2002 09:31:12 +1100
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>Hi Sally,
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>I enjoyed this very much, but wasn't taken witht he ending pair of lines.
>Vaguely disappointed me for some reason.
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>Cheers,
>
>Frank
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>The Tales of Faust poetry page can be found at:
>http://www.hotkey.net.au/~flp/F_index.htm
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>>Big Bang theory
>>
>>They married in the nineteen fifties
>>lived with her parents
>>Slept in a big iron bed
>>with brass knobs
>>A china pot slivered underneath
>>The lino was orange and green
>>too cold for bare feet
>>They snuggled closer to keep warm
>>The  eiderdown overcoat fell off
>>each time they made love
>>and the bed groaned with them
>>Once there was a bigger groan than usual
>>the china pot shattered
>>and the ceiling moved instead of the earth
>>Downstairs her mother dropped a stitch
>>and her father smiled and lit his pipe
>>Now they have a divan, fitted carpets
>>en suite facilities
>>Her parents died long ago
>>but they do have ten grandchildren.
>>
>>Sally James
>>
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