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Brigid Anthony <[log in to unmask]>
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The Pennine Poetry Works <[log in to unmask]>
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Wed, 13 Nov 2002 18:00:27 -0500
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Very nice, Christina. The penultimate stanza jars, conflicts with the mood. Suggest you take the 'I' out, and make it a simple statement that she knew about loss. I like the winding down, like the gramophone. David
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