Hello Christina,
I like the way you build up the image of the figure in this poem, the details you´ve selected work well. I wasn´t bothered by `buggerall´ in the first line, which I think someone else felt jarred. However, I did find the line `with nobs on` in the middle of the poem had a false sound for me. You were wondering about the penultimate couplet. I think you need to do something about it, either a substantial rewrite or replace with something else.
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Best wishes, Mike
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