thanks for the thought.
kol tuv, Ryfkah
In a message dated 11.12.02 4:10:23 AM, [log in to unmask] writes:
<< Hi Ryfkah,
I want to like this poem more because I like where it's going, the
tensions/feelings it's describing at the end.
But I don't feel I know where it's coming from - I feel as if I want a
location (either in the title or early on in the poem). Then I feel I'll be
able to go with it's words all the better.
Bob
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